Sunday, April 23, 2006

pages 3 - 6, updated

Here are a few more pages, with some changes to story on page 6.



At 10:43 AM, Blogger Lorin said...

Love the mood. Less is more; you nailed it.

At 9:24 PM, Blogger Will Terrell said...

I agree with Lorin, I really like the atmosphere and mood. Great stuff.

My only suggestion would be to flip the woman in the last panel on that first page. She's looking over her right shoulder in that middle panel and the transition is really abrupt to the last one.

Other than that it looks great. I really love the rendering of her sword, very subtle but awesome.

At 10:16 AM, Anonymous Tim M said...

Hey Francis, these are looking great. What is the story for?

At 8:45 PM, Blogger AF said...

I love the cat....I can sense a little animal humor coming! I can't wait to see what his fate has in store for him!

At 8:46 AM, Blogger cdeboda said...

Enjoy seeing the progression of these pages. Thanks for sharing.

At 10:17 PM, Blogger francis said...

thanks you guys; Will, thanks for the crit, always appreciated.

tim, it's just one of three stories that a couple of friends and I are putting together in an ashcan sort of thing. We're hoping to get something going, or at least a bit of work out of it.

thanks lorin, adam and chris!

At 9:41 PM, Blogger &Rew said...

hey francis - i've met you through Ron Lemen at Watts atelier. and i think soincidentally at the SD con or an e3 or something. who knows... for all practical intent and purpose, i'm just another one of those random artist kids. - cool blog. way to wip comics into shape.



At 10:19 PM, Blogger francis said...

Hi Andrew - Yeah I think I remember. Were you in the same class with Wade Schin? Anyway I bet I would remember you for sure if I saw you.


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