Tuesday, February 14, 2006

Not a lot of progress today. Gotta spend some quality time with the missus ya know! But here is the initial stab at page 3. Gradually getting the heroine to look consistent throughout the story, which is nice if you're trying to be coherent and actually tell a story.

You know, it would be cool to get some suggestions for a title for this book. The story deals with society which has reaped the benefits of advances in genetics, nanotechnology, robotics and information technology, but has since fallen on some hard times due to some sort of cataclysm involving the aforementioned technologies.

5 Comments:

At 8:14 AM, Blogger dankit said...

It's looking good, Francis. Can't wait to see the final product. How about this title:

"The Society Which Has Reaped the Benefits of Advances in Genetics, Nanotechnology, Robotics and Information Technology, but Has Since Fallen On Some Hard Times Due To Some Sort of Cataclysm Involving the Aforementioned Technologies"

Oh wait, I think that one is already taken. I'll post if I can think of real ones. :)

 
At 1:07 PM, Blogger francis said...

You are teh funny guy!

Yeah that doesnt roll off the tongue like I might have hoped...

 
At 9:18 PM, Anonymous AF said...

How about "Urban Praxis"
"The Modern Drug"
"Pestiside"
"The Proletariat Aggression"
"Cataclysm""
or maybe the "Bourgeoisie Merchant"


Well thats all my imagintation spouted out for now...

 
At 10:51 PM, Blogger billy said...

damn adam lol

 
At 10:28 PM, Blogger francis said...

Nice suggestions Adam. There's a certain economy that Dan's suggestion lacks... :D

 

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